Comments of chapter undefined of Love Untangled

The first chapter is hooking... Make the paragraph short😊 keep going

Try breaking it down into paragraphs instead of one whole thing, it becomes too fast pace for the reader and slightly confusing. Like how you did with the first line, so far this is good👍

I love it so far

This man stole the first chapter

Love this

interesting, benjamin seems kinda intriguing

Really nice first chapter...loving it so far

The first chapter immediately drew me in. I love how the stories going so far can't wait to see what happens next as I continue reading.

l like it course it just like watching a movie

Hooked

Aw, I love the guy already. this is a great chapter!

Tbh i Already like Jasmine’s character so I hope they ends up together😩🥰🤧

I'm liking this already!!!

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Wow, oh wow... Such intensity.. Phew.. Now lemme see what happens next 🏃🏃

awwwwww sweet!❤️

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