Comments of chapter undefined of S.H.A.Z.A.M.

Honestly, it's good biggest turnoff is how he gave them his identity for no reason...he can stay as Shazam forever like black Adam but he simply didn't want too and changed back again for no reason.

Terrible excusses for why your doing what your doing just agreeing with fury and willing to go with him knowing hydra is in shield and fury would be haply to lock him up amd copy his powers if he could mcs just being naieve and stupid.

Thanks for the chapter 👍

Thx for the epic chap bro, honestly im kind of indiferent about fury, either if the mc of a novel hate him a little because of his job or is compresinve about the fact that it is his job and is trying to do the best for people, which is true I honestly dont care, there are diferent persectives, just dont let the hate some people might throw to you affect you and this novel

in my personal opinion I want mc to make the power of Shazam to his own base strength . power of Shazam is although quite op it feels like not his own . it also has a lot of weakness . in dc Billy never tried to make his strength his own . it have a lot of weakness . if he studied magic he could become more powerful in base form . by making Shazam and mc s power fuse together and become a single entity he will have a lot of advantages like immortality magical talent and also making him truly a god other than a champion that use god's powers. this is my personal opinion towards Shazam power , nothing more . and also waiting for new chapters

the story is still good and i think all this hate for furry is unwarranted since his job is to be a spy and gather information not to be a hero and suddenly there comes a super powerful guy who does what the hulk does and more without losing control , it's obvious that he would be worried, even more when the guy decides to show off by destroying a forest in a fight with a god and being irresponsible (I hope the protagonist tries to be a little more heroic and not just chase women and self-satisfaction).

it started out bad, but it got better, edpero it gets even better. Ps: still seems a bit rushed.

thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter 🙂

The chapter is good, it's just that the power of shazam is nerfed by mc himself. I know he's not a genius, he's more like us average people or below, moreover I'm surprised by his desire to be a hero. Where did that desire come from? Even he suddenly has an obligation to protect humans? (when he first met Loki). Also an incredible change in attitude, from being lazy to being a passionate superhero. Also about his identity which doesn't need to be hidden, bruhh sooner or later he could be killed by an enemy more dangerous than him (that won't happen because the plot is already set). Not too careful for a reincarnated person, by the way thor here is stronger than the movie version (or on par with shazam itself, maybe idk man).

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I don't support that you don't hate fury man your just a hypocrite

Mooooooooaaaaaarr~!!!!!

Thanks for the chapter. Please update more.

second Thanks for the chapter

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is this dropped?

I understand the fic has fallen?