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Comments of chapter undefined of World Ixion/SAGA

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Daragon_Fiyar
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What! I can't believe this, I thought I was wrong before, but this turned out to be true, you took the reference from Otome Game Sekai wa Mob ni Kibishii Sekai Desu, from his world, mc background, from mc being sold, then about him finding the robot like a ball , even mc's fight with the prince, even though Alice is not engaged to the prince, but there are some things in common, even now that Alice, transferred to the territory of mc is also the same, even though in this novel the mc does not know that he is in the otome game, and the one who knows it is erselice... I don't know what her name is, anyway she knows that the world is a game, really the storyline of this novel is too fast, the conflict is too fast, if you want to make a novel, and take references from other people's novels, at least try not to be too similar, it's too similar, in the beginning, if you ask me, that's all, hopefully the novel will be better.