Comments of chapter undefined of Pokemon Alternate Universe Adventures
Pokemon Alternate Universe Adventures
Azrail93
Chapter comments18
think there is a big flaw in that fight with lucario and the time its going on especially with the hiding behind stones... weather move should still be ongoing... and it hurts lucario badly... if he dowsnt clear some room it should constantly refill and do damage .. so after a few minutes hiding it should be down pretty badly to be honest
My man I love your work, did for years and still do, but for real it's been like 20 chapters of only 1 gym fight, it's wayyy too long for this, even 10 was already pushing it but it'll probably be 30 before it's done ... It gives the impression that the story doesn't go forward at all, at your rate of 4 chapters per week I can't handle 2 months of 1 Gym, it's an absolute nightmare ... Stilllove your story but please make sure the fights gets shortened or entirely skip them if you plan to spend as many chapters for every gym circuit
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