Comments of chapter undefined of Pokemon Alternate Universe Adventures

Thanks for the chapter! When Mothra evolves, what are you going to do with the extra Butterfree? She is still more talented than both of his parents' Butterfrees.

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This whole traveling and exploring at such a young age is truly weird... I understand all the reasoning behind it, as well as the potential to level up new pokémon during the next time skip, but it still is truly a head scratcher of a decision to travel =/ Still enjoying the story alot though.

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The routes in your pokeverse's Kanto are changed up, aren't they? I mean that makes sense since Kanto is much bigger and there are many more cities scattered all over it. Still, if Mikail ever mentioned that then I sure as heck do not remember. It definitely could have been mentioned, especially in the map chapter from somewhere closer to the beginning of the story, and I just forgot.

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I, personally, dislike when the Main Character of a book has to hide their true identity, especially for long periods of time, so the impatience to go out on an adventure to the point where he has to do so is annoying to me. I mean I get it, Pokemon is awesome, he's big enough to be mistaken as someone old enough to adventure, and only people that know him personally or he tells know, but he can't become an official trainer without causing problems for himself legally later since if he became one now, he would have to completely falsify the documents needed to do so, which would cause legal trouble. not to mention that him needing to make a whole different identity to sell pokeballs he makes is unnecessary, he could just say that he was taught how to by the persona he was going to make, then say after training was finished, disappeared. Otherwise, I love the story.

Okay I'm not mistaken, these chapters are walls of text. Not pleasant to read. Great stuff, just annoying.

Thanks for the chapter! I'm excited to see where this goes.

I can't wait for him to find new materials on his journey 😁

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Why did you stop adding spaces