Comments of chapter undefined of The Game Creator in Marvel(News)

Friend author, to be honest the presented contract is a little too forced, like forcing the mc to defend the land, making him only act in self-defense, this is a bit exaggerated and restricts the mc too much. I recommend changing the terms to the following, the mc must not destroy the entire planet, they will establish an alliance of mutual aid, exchanges of knowledge must be allowed but following the law of equivalent exchanges, the main responsible for everything will be mc and whoever occupies the position of supreme magician, I think that would be something more reasonable.

This is how you ruin a story. Take notes guys

at this rate he is indirectly an avenger , might as well join S.H.I.E.L.D (such good story is totally ruined😔😔). and whats with minimal damage and should be repairable... i mean what should he even do...if he is scared of ancient one can't he go to his space where he creates game. after this chapter the other copy story of this fic is better ...😔

in most marvel novels most of the time when the ancient one is introduced everyone hated it now I know why

The author doesn't care about your opinions people since even when the author said he/she would change the section of the chapter where the x-men would appear, he/she still didn't do it until now. Now it turned into this stupid scenario where the mc has signed an unfair contract.

naive mc

This story is now ruined because of the stupidity of the author. This fanfic used to be good but this chapter alone makes many readers want to abandoned this fanfic forever unless this chapter got deleted or changed. Bye....

I feel like throwing this story away now

question why doesn't mc tell the ancient one about jean

Dude, please, rework these chapters

Rewrite the chapter. Delete it. Or you lose half the readers.

Hmm...

author, what about making future rewards that are accessories become cosmetics in games so players can show off their loot to other players.

The author is super idiot and beyond stupid. He basically just like giving a gun to a stranger and ask the stranger to shoot him if he behave badly. Whose in the right mind will do that to himself? Giving a shackle to himself when he basically a free man but choose to limit himself by the magic contract. The worst novel i've ever read in the webnovel. He doesn't even deserve to have a one rank star if judged by this chapter alone.

stupid and naive mc

MC made and signed a slave contract????

don't listen to those critics you are doing a great job and thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter Wish you well author Keep up the good work

Author, you forgot about the rewards of creating the fourth game. 1x Personal Reward, 2x Game Rewards, and 15,000 System Points. It also seems to me that you forgot about the staff of magnus, the holocron and the all seeing eyes of god.

If you remove this contract and rewrite this chapter you will still have me as a loyal reader...