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Comments of chapter undefined of Berserk Stick System

RizzZzze
RizzZzzeLv10RizzZzze

See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

Awesome_Alankrit
Awesome_AlankritLv3Awesome_Alankrit

thanks for the chapter. the mistakes you make is bearable and can be understood easily so don't worry about it. and also things are going to be better from here. right?

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bennylokku
bennylokkuLv1bennylokku

main problems were the gender mistakes "him" for "her"

Readtilltheybleed
ReadtilltheybleedLv10Readtilltheybleed

Um, I’m American 🇺🇸 Born in the US of A English is my native tongue While I didn’t scour the story looking for mistakes like a so called grammar-natzi, I didn’t find any problems. I’m not saying that there are none, but compared to the sort of writing I’ve come to expect from this website… this story seems immaculate. 👍📖

Alanray64
Alanray64Lv14Alanray64

Already introducing an appealing character. Being 10 is a worry, hopefully time skip is near

HD_Skittles
HD_SkittlesLv14HD_Skittles

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HD_Skittles
HD_SkittlesLv14HD_Skittles

Exp

MK_Infinity
MK_InfinityLv14MK_Infinity

what's the use of the sword if you can save the world by a stick

Sinful_Cyanide
Sinful_CyanideLv15Sinful_Cyanide

No, please no tsundere, not a fan of dishonest women

sanyuky
sanyukyLv5sanyuky

gracias por el capitulo

WolfLord
WolfLordLv14WolfLord

Thanks for the chapter on a good story

PHOENIX_EMPRESS
PHOENIX_EMPRESSLv3PHOENIX_EMPRESS

Penjilat anjing?

Vahn
VahnLv13Vahn

Obrigado

PhantomNite629
PhantomNite629Lv15PhantomNite629

thx for the chap

Harold_Ikechukwu
Harold_IkechukwuLv3Harold_Ikechukwu

nice

Tales_King
Tales_KingLv10Tales_King

Thanks for the chapter...

Dreamstrafe
DreamstrafeLv15Dreamstrafe

ahhh grooming... (also hopefully the writing improves, I'm assuming this is the author's first work so I'm holding my judgement in reserve, if it doesn't improve at all by the time I have to pay I'll probably drop)

Abd_Elrhman_Elsaid
Abd_Elrhman_ElsaidLv3Abd_Elrhman_Elsaid

Thanks for the chapter

RARC19
RARC19Lv4RARC19

Thanks for the chapter!

KingConner
KingConnerLv15KingConner