Pixiepiu
terrible english
pls your whole writing style isnt good. Your vocabulary destroys the immersion, you use way too many repititions.
Pixiepiu:really please point out
oh, interesting first couple of chapters! wasn't sure how the woman who killed the army would play into everything (thinking it was the standard love at first sight thing initially), but it seems the stakes are more dire. love that! :D
It's interesting. Want to know about the girl who will save him.
l like it already đ
