Comments of chapter undefined of VRMMORPG: The Other World Online

This is looking to be a very interesting world! Some writing tips: before you start working on your story, write for ten minutes a day without stopping--don't stop even to edit mistakes. It won't be great writing, but that's OK. When you're finished with ten minutes, read through and pick your favorite sentence and use that to start a new story. Do this every day and you'll be a much faster writer before you know it.

game on !

Gotta admit yeah her friend is an idiot 💀😂💯

I like the whole premise and world building here. Very interesting so far.

is mc a female?

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wow first chapter and her friend is already selling her out

C virus? qi awakening? COVID lol

eh... I dunno, it has a "Romance" tag. I try to avoid those, not because I hate romance, but because most authors really suck at writing it. Even pros. It's either over the top mushy, lacks common sense, or treats women like invalids incapable of doing anything on their own. I'm bored though, so I may as well give it a shot anyway. Most likely I'll end up dropping it.

I hope it stays clear of cliches

Her best friend is a bad friend in my opinion

hahahaha, game on!!! Let's see what this game is up to

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nice start

I read one of these books before and loved it. watched ready player one, loved it. Akin don't ruin my streak!

wow😂

Interesting ...