callmeotooosan
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Good start... a bit too casual with the writing in my personal opinion, and the word choice could be improved, but definitely a good read so far.
Don't drop, it is good although the grammar could be improved upon, it's still a good read
I love love love love this~
I'm shocked because there's only one chapter here đ±
good revised chapter
This is a good start!!! keep goingggg!!! and thank you for the chapterrrđđ
I truly enjoyed the first chapter!
Good Opening
