Comments of chapter undefined of The Female Cultivator In The World Of Men

thank's again for the update

Hmm has decent potential, however its like its written by a 10 year old No offense, The fludidty of the writing is Abysmal, The Reason for his Reincsrnatiin was Stupid and I'm not going to lie, if a person got transmigrated into another body, it would heal sure they could die straight after but it doesn't make and logical sense to go into a dead body because well the body stopped working for a reason, then there's the he this and that when he's been a woman for at least two chapters, The paragraphing and formating is beyond abysmal, and more etc

Getting better and better! Onto the next chap!

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There was actually nothing much wrong with the original. You just had to edit the content a bit. You can work with this as well but don't change it too much. Secondly write what you want. You can listen to reasonable suggestions but that should not clash with what general idea you have for the story. If you have a doubt on how to mix the two genres you've going here Xianxia/xuanhuan and Litrpg I suggest reading other works of the two genres. The first few volumes of "Legendary Moonlight Sculptor" is good for Litrpg, for the Xianxia/xuanhuan you can find one you like(there are many).

You still have to make a LOT of corrections. There are many mistakes due to your rewrite.