Comments of chapter undefined of Dual Cultivator Reborn[System In The Cultivation World]

Cliche start and grammar needs work.

For the love of god please download a grammar and spelling software like grammarly and go through all the chapters you've written this is such a low effort way to massively upgrade your story

this MC suck balls naive not like the real dual cultivation novel mc

if you improve your writing... it will improve a lot

I feel like my brain is melting reading this.

I'm only reading this because of a mission in the Easter event... definitely not gonna continue after complete the task

for the love of all that is holy please get an editor that actually knows English! I might like this story if it was even partially readable! This chapter literally gave me a headache.

I can't blame them for laughing... that situation is absolutely hilarious ... I have a feeling THEY will regret it though!😅🤣

Lol bruh 😂😂

Needs grammerly. I reckoned not reading at all. Massive headache inducing errors.

Thanks for the chapter

definitely need to Grammer check and work on your sentence building! I would like to be able to read without getting a headache from all these hacked up sentences.

love u sir geybin

linke

so far so good.

the story have a great value as a rebirth man, that he changed a personality of shameless person to a great person

Thank You For The Chapter ❤️❤️

hope this will bring excitement.......

uwu