SHIVAM_Chouksey
the chapter is pretty good...but need some more proof reading
these so called cultivators didnt see the lightning that struck him?. are they all blind?
you need to learn how to use articles and when to capitalize words.
like for exp.
like for xp
suddenly its kinda wonky
Like for xp
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this seems interesting although it's quite confusing in ways
Please get an editor. We can still read, but capital letters, comma spaces definitely a bother
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
Thanks
meanwhile....
Bien