KinghtariusWR
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KinghtariusWR5mthCommentedwhat I hate the most about naruto world is the way of gay love between third and danzo
In the eyes of the Third Hokage, Danzo's starting point was for Konoha's safety.- KinghtariusWR5mthReplied to ActionHackGamers
readerd know that mc dont know anything haha
Now I know that he saw something in me. In all of us captains. We don't know what it is to this day. (I'm sure the readers know) - KinghtariusWR5mthCommented
until this chapter, the curse of webnovel already showed."mc system = idiot"too many messy and force plot
This book has been deleted. - KinghtariusWR5mthPosted
Writing Quality : good, easy to understand for people with not so good english, but need to correct some grammar to make it perfect. Stability of Updates : new reader here and dunno if the updates has schedule. Story Development : Good. not too fast, not too slow. hope author not make pov shit that repeat same plot in different angle, in the future released. Character Design & World Background : Good, but need more tiny complement description so reader can dive easier into the story plot not just skimming read. I mean some readers hard to imagine think to dive into the story, so more tiny description will help.
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why kick? just stab the head directly. so dumb
The occurrence resembled a calculated rendezvous with a kick. - KinghtariusWR6mthCommented
30 years old soul feel disheartened bcoz of someone not talk to him. that's new haha
This made Ryan a little disheartened, but it also allowed Ryan to spend time with other students in the Great hall and in the common room. Several classmates told Ryan that they felt a lot more relaxed without Hermione sitting on the side. It seems that Hermione's handling of interpersonal relations is indeed a bit problematic. - KinghtariusWR6mthCommented
so author, which part of it that said he wont hang out with both of girls until both girl resolved their problem? now he's hang out in grand hall while eating hahaha
Her hands relax at my confirmation of her question, and she sits next to me. Most students have gone back to their own business, but some are still whispering while pointing at me. - KinghtariusWR6mthCommented
it calls stupidity. wizard is someone who seek truth so it always based on fact not based on believed.
Even though her concerns are not based on evidence, I've never had another my age watch out for me. She's still going out of her way to ensure I'm safe. It's that's not a friend; then I don't know what is. - KinghtariusWR6mthCommented
just hope this girl died already not just knocked out, coz author build her char suddenly become so dumb with unstable emotion.
A few feet away from him was the " Knocked out " Xiao Ning'er . - KinghtariusWR6mthCommented
uggh... what a braindead mc. if that mothafu.. not trust then leave. theres no need to join avenger if you wanna do good deed.
There was no chance for me to respond when Sam stepped forward as well, patting me on the back. For a moment, I felt myself choke up. I swallowed down the tears like a man, only to have to wipe away some. Jeeze, why was I breaking down? All Captain America had said was that he trusted me."Uh... thanks man." - KinghtariusWR6mthCommentedCh 10 Chapter 10: bell test
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can someone make a summary of it?
It's not unreasonable to assume that Guy would find it exceedingly difficult to land a hit on Minato in a direct confrontation, even without Minato employing Hiraishin. Minato's reflexes are so acute that he can effortlessly evade any incoming attacks, a feat even more impressive when considering his ability to outpace Obito's movements during their encounter. While it's a known fact that Guy cannot withstand a Rasengan due to the lack of modifications or healing abilities like Obito and Kabuto, a face-off between Minato without Hiraishin and 7 Gates Guy would likely result in Minato's victory. Furthermore, we haven't even factored in Minato's sage mode for this scenario. When pitted against 8 Gates Guy, it becomes a challenging battle, but one that's likely to conclude swiftly. The key question revolves around whether Guy unleashes all 8 gates from the outset, granting him a staggering 100-fold increase in power over his base mode. While Minato with Hiraishin can effectively evade any attacks Guy hurls at him, he can also maintain a safe distance or redirect Guy's assault, akin to "guiding thunder," especially if Guy were to employ the Night Guy technique. Minato could secure victory without necessarily adopting an offensive stance or tapping into sage mode. In all honesty, given Minato's space-time abilities and status as the fastest shinobi of his era prior to the emergence of the Six Paths users, he seems nearly invincible in a taijutsu showdown. Sage mode further bolsters his physical prowess to the point where Guy's capabilities, even with 7 gates, appear akin to those of a genin in pure taijutsu. - KinghtariusWR6mthCommented
hahaha you make me remember when i was 5 y.o and my dad buy tv colour tv for the first time. after 3 days the tv at my home, i get curious about how can there be moving picture and i open the tv case and all part of it when my dad at work. sadly i cant put all the part back together and get scolded because of it đ¤Ł
Growing up Damien spent a lot of time with his parents, who always made the time to be with him. His dad being an independent accountant was able to often work from home and take care of Damien. While his mom, wanting to spend time with her new child, took time off from work for three years after Damien was born. It was a loving and caring family. Damien was also considered smart for his age. Since he was three years old he was starting to show that he learns things quicker and easier than all the other toddlers around. Already being able to read by himself, Damien began to get curious about things. Beginning to always ask questions about anything that catches his attention. By the age of 5 Damien was considered a very bright child. Always the top of his class and able to easily memorize everything he learns. But Damien had recently developed a quirk of taking things apart to see how they work. But luckily, the things he has taken apart so far were restricted to things easily put back together. Damien was always a very kind, energetic, and outgoing child. Which were qualities that attributed to him making many friends with his classmates. - KinghtariusWR7mthCommented
author... have u been cuckold?
Another interesting detail is that James is actually Michelle's half-brother, not cousin; her father slept with the wife of his brother and ended up conceiving James. It was also the reason her uncle went crazy and murdered her parents and his wife before taking his own life. (A/N To be fair, Michelle's family is the perfect example of how we can choose our friends, not our family. Now she is going to be tortured and killed for her half-brother's mistake.) - KinghtariusWR7mthPosted
too much... i mean too much... monologue about this and that which has no essentials to the proggress of the story or the plot. the story become so slow with too many chapter wasted for BS monologue. it supposed to be action novel coz it take on MCU but become monologue drama novel with less action as complimentary plot. reader wanna see the story progress more than just reading whats inside superman head.need more detail about mc, char in novel and world background but author put more how much mc think of something and how smart he is explaining something to his self not to others around him or to reader.it's getting boring to read it after chapter 30s... i think 5 more chapter if it's still like this, i will drop the novel.btw the idea of the novel is great but the way deliver it nees more improvement
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free will, gain resource, doing something only as their moral state... wo who's gonna be the servant now? đ author, you shouldn't make mc become a retard after act cool by saying "be my servants or die"
Lu Zhen sneered inwardly but agreed readily, saying, "Alright, I agree." - KinghtariusWR7mthCommented
its not like he's going to die anyway
"Sigh, looks like age is getting to me," Yu Bai thought with a mixture of emotions. He felt that Lu Zhen was taking too much of a risk. Lu Zhen still had a bright future ahead of him, and he shouldn't risk his life to kill a mere assassin. After all, Lu Zhen had just begun his martial path, and just by solely relying on the abundant resources from the Lu family, he could easily reach the second stage of martial arts with a little effort. - KinghtariusWR7mthCommented
simply has low iq, low eq, and pedo at the same time.
'I had planned to tease and even scare the child version of Lynn. But meh! I might have gone too far if I did it, even if I can fix it up by letting her remember the memories she had in the past timeline.' - KinghtariusWR7mthCommented
the question shound be "is this what happen if someone too idiot and has EQ at all?" đ¤Ł
[Lynn's eyes became moist and she was close to crying. You know your teasing had gone too far but after remembering your relationship with Lynn before in the previous timeline, you couldn't help but think, 'Is this what happened when a man encountered his wife who suffered from amnesia?']