Comments of chapter undefined of Rebirth: Over the Horizon

Metempsychosis: the supposed transmigration at death of the soul of a human being or animal into a new body of the same or a different species.

Excessive use of a word 'seriously' in the opening paragraphs. You should seriously fix it.

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Wow the beginning about the game becoming reality is just the same as manhwa "i play the game seriously" which the mc reincarnate back in time after he and his sister was killed by some high level player's . Come on author try to be original with your plot although you made the mc a mage and he got a console for his sis immediately that just doesn't really add much to me 👀

Great start, few grammar errors

Great i hope a steady update

Kick that insufferable face because

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First try to reread your chapters after writting them, instead of asking us to check for the meaning of something, it prove that you don't care about your readers opinion, and only want us to help you while we get nothing but headache from going trhough your writting

First try to reread your chapters after writting them, instead of asking us to check for the meaning of something, it prove that you don't care about your readers opinion, and only want us to help you while we get nothing but headache from going trhough your writting

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Wait! Why didn’t he explain anything to his sister, didnt he say casual players get killed! Even if he didn’t tell her the specifics, isn’t not telling her anything kinda letting her stay weak and dying later on!?

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not so sure about this but first chapter is simple enough. 🤔

Gia. As in gaia/gaea? Also. This is kind of fast paced. Mc got into this time rewind but after checking his phone he was like, im ok with it now. Also there is no prolog. Normally there would be for something this detailed. Ofc you don't need one as long as you read the synopsis. Other than lack of prolog, everything is great!

so is there a time difference between game time and irl time? 90 days seems pretty short for it to come to irl after 90 days.

huh ..... so moral of the story: Always try hard inn games

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