Comments of chapter undefined of Shadow Recruit

Bit odd time jumps but good chapter! 😁

cool book...

a great start

The writing style is so good!

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Amazing start!

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WOOOOOOW....First of all let me address the elephant sitting on this chapter.. THERE IS AN IMMACULATE USE OF ENGLISH in this chapter. I felt more refreshed with the father daughter dynamic than I though I would at the start... Descriptions are perfect, the flow of conversation makes me feel like I'm watching it as a movie instead... the last act, if I may call it that, leads perfectly into the next chapter... I'm anxious, excited and impressed...