Comments of chapter undefined of Eternal Pursuit

Nice chapter. It read like a proper Xianxia webnovel. There is some minor mistakes with grammar (All names should be capitalized, and repeated words). But all in all it was a good first chapter.

This reminded me of Sage Monarch but bruh, thought Ji Long was the MC lool

So we're having a villain MC type? Seems like a cunning one too. This is a good start.

Its a good start.

Thanks

OOh things look interesting. Can't wait for the next chapter 😀