Comments of chapter undefined of Throne of the Grand Magus: The beginning

Man i dont think you gotta put down your story like that. For what its worth, these boring chapters are actually delicous appetizers before the main course. It’s good build up. On a side note though, I do wish for more context on why the last turf war was important and what it meant to the characters. I can kinda infer that its the last hurrah before he graduates and that’s why its important, but some good build up for this part would sound fun to read; and a way to get more attached to your characters. Keep up the good work!

Even though it has shades of spider man that back story makes no sense. You would do better by having the MC want to go back to save his friends instead of his ego.

Michael Is the best