Mithun_ReddyGaru
Seriously can you just get rid of the Queen? No one remembers her name as she is never shown or mentioned it’s honestly dumb to have him marry then have no writing of her being in the city maybe running into people literally anything to make her an actually fleshed out character because characters you have in a couple chapters are more fleshed out
Good! chapter. Can we have one or two chapters about the Mughals as well. would be nice to know their perspective after the catastrophic loss of three extremely productive territories and a strategic military base. Also the Mughal emperor seemed surprised at imperviousness of Vijaynagar fort walls, pretty sure it would fuel his greed to try to either get his hands on it or to know more about it. Also the level of disaster for Mughals needs to be highlighted and emphasize ld more.