Victor_Weismann
Great chapter!! I can't wait to see how Tasha & Maya react to Volk the King of Werewolves, Alpha of Alphas, getting punked within his palace that is in his Realm full of nothing but Werewolves at his command. Plus he was punked in front of his wife no less lol I can't wait for their reactions it probably got the two women hot & bothered craving some Victor lol
Good lord the size of thar green hat is CRAZY. Thanks for the chapter as always. I only have one small critique. I enjoy reading the sophisticated writing. It feels like an adult wrote this book. However, when describing Villa inner turmoil the wording became slightly redundant. Words like âinsignificantâ, âterrorâ, âfearâ, and âdemonâ we used a lot. It felt like 3 paragraphs conveyed the same message/feeling in a slightly different way. Not that it was bad. Far from it. Just something to keep in mind. Maybe using words that directly said what Volk saw âinâ Vic. We know he saw his greatest fears and terrors but what are those? What specifically did he see that made him shut up?