Victor_Weismann
was the fight with diablo and victor at let down? yes. it is not completly disappointing though. i did like how it went overall due to victors development as a king and progenitor and the slight change in his personality they way he just took everything from him and talked down to before he completly dominated was absolutly satisfying. mistakes happen but you did the best with the situation as long as your learn from them and dont make the same and keep moving forward i will cont reading. side not please dont gloss over the upcoming character development with all the new females and some of current ones.
Properly talk a little about what happened for a little bit 😉😝. Especially with each woman that is now "his." I mean... seriously this is basically saying that he is taking the v from Leona and other certain women during this time. That is a very special moment for most women 😉. Some still remember it. I guess Agnes is getting some as well. Also.... does this mean that he is ready for kids as well especially since he's been gone for over 700 years? That long time could change his "opinion" about certain things and personal topics about expanding certain OYAKODON combinations 😉😉😉.
Tbh I wouldn't want to read 30 chapters of only s*x but some girls deserve a s*x scene. Scarlett sisters elenour, rose, haruna and agnes. Speaking of Agnes, did she ever get over Adonis? You can still think she can put a proper goodbye scene after lilith is r*surrected adonis. And She hasn't even defeated persephone yet. So this chapter feels so forced 😶
The last chapters seem extremely rushed... First with h*ll without any details about Vics stay there and his power after he left, then too much hype buildup for diablo only to end up as a dissapointing trashing... Next, makes Scathach seem as powerful as Diablo as if she was equal to him and could easily end him or ending the war easily... And last but not least the rushed development of the love interests that could be so much more interesting plot... Honestly the quality of the novel dropped since the fight of Vic vs War. I just hope that it will get better in the future and the quality of the novel will get better in the future
Who would not say anything, but I think these were very necessary good chapters. Not great, but good. These chapters have been needed for a long time to get rid of the suspended relationship around Victor. All the same, many of these girls have been in an indeterminate state for too long, and just then there was a good opportunity to close all these lines. Especially with the Scarlet sisters, it was long overdue to do so. In the end, each of them at one time or another showed their interest in Victor, and he clearly made it clear that he would not let them go. And Skkhata, in a conversation with Natasha, also actually agreed to this. So all this is quite logical and expected. And as for Paper and Fred... Da*n, I'm glad it didn't happen. The only thing they have in common is the anime. I think that Paper is much more than just an anime lover. She is the daughter of the strongest female vampire, in whose family character, zeal and strength are primarily valued, and in all these points it is even ridiculous to compare Fred with Victor, she is the one who, even among her sisters, distinguished herself with her strength, and experienced a lot of grief in her life. life and she needs someone who can give her a sense of protection and reliability, and not just a g*ek with whom you can only discuss anime. As friends they can communicate but no more. And just like Skkhata said, if she thinks Victor is the perfect man, then it means that there is no one better for her daughters, after all, she raised her daughters in her own way of thinking. So yes, the chapters are good, but a little rushed, but only because there is no time to stretch these love arcs even further.
Didn't Scathach say befor that she won't give any other daughters to victor? I know time went by so fast for Victor, but at the same time, the world didn't pass that fast. So even i guess about six months, I found it very strange that scathact was affected by natashia during this time. At the same time, victor did not have many interactions with pepper, siena and lacus. I mean, it was ridiculous that everything was rushed so suddenly. The same goes for Rose. Also, the part about Lilith seeing the new h*ll and being affected seems to be skipped...😶
During this time of "love making" could you have certain conversations come up that we can read about certain subjects. Like "arranged marriage" stuff with certain characters and the topics of "Oyakodon's." Along with Ruby's modified plan. That way we could copy and paste that full plan on discord. So that there is no more confusion. A plan that can still be changed in the future.
Victor. The conversations on discord are about a small but possible rush on things for the series. We have faith in you ❤️ still. These two chapters did feel a little weird. So having some dialogue during these next "love giving" chapters could help with the natural process of the relationship conversation with the MC. Helping solidify the bonds he will make now and in the future.
Thanks for the chap ,author you said vic has always has the godking energy all he needed was gull control over it. So what of his 500y evolution is his powers not suppose to receive some kind of boost in quantity. Also what with characters(scathach ,war)wanting to reach the mc level like seriously Is it now easy or do they now have potential than him.