Victor_Weismann
Don't think nonsense, this is just Violet's honest concerns, as I said before, I planned from the beginning for Anna and Leon to be Victor's 'pillars'. But as I like to write the characters as 'realistically' as possible, I can't ignore the changes that the passage of time causes in people. Leon is not Victor, he is not a Yandere full of love and someone with loose screws in his head, he is a normal 'human', such a possibility is not unlikely. Realistically speaking, some couples can't even last 20 years with each other, let alone spend 200 - 1000 years. If you don't have a very clear love, or grow from the beginning with the values of a race whose longevity is ridiculous like vampires. The probability of someone switching partners in the meantime is 99% As stated earlier, I don't plan for this to happen, Leon and Anna are Victor's pillars, but according to their developments over the years in the novel, such a situation could happen. Before someone uses this as ammunition against me. When I speak as realistically as possible, I speak in the sense in which, for example. By some mistake Leon betrays Anna, and Anna just hurts him, and forgives him. This will not make sense within the context of Anna's personality. That's what I mean by being as 'realistic' as possible, after all, it's a fiction novel, most things are unreal.
i say ignore half of these ppl that say you should or should not do something. this is your story keep doing whaterver you want. they will either read enough to see how it plays out or not. thanks in advance and looking forward to more.
Victor_Weismann:Yeah, exactly this. I plan something, I create an outline, but depending on how the situation develops, it changes. As you said, I don't plan to 'force' a situation, I want to make things as natural as possible.
I like the version with the conflict between Anna and Leon. And I don't think the author should just leave them as good parents, that would kill them as characters and take away their personality. Conflicts are needed for the development of characters, and the conflict that Violet describes is inevitable, and most importantly, absolutely logical.
Honestly, I don't care what the author does with Anna and Leon. They're already background characters, so I don't care what the author does with them whether Anna is in Victor's harem or Leon's. I find it strange that you guys are making so much drama. When Natashia said she was going to give her daughters and sister to Victor, and then, no one said anything?
author, if you want to make it realistic, my advice to you, leon, don't suppress your emotions. They say there are 4 psychotherapists in my relative, they say there is a personality difference, when one of them gets married, at least one of the two parties suppresses themselves 54% divorces 29% cheats 5% commits suicide 1.6% kills their spouse, 0.4% states that they behave like two strangers, 0.1% they just attain happiness Buddha says it usually takes a few years
Poor guy Leon is a good father and sacrifices a lot for his family and has a difficult childhood also the one who taught victor family values I don’t think he deserves this kinda ending like violent says just because he wasn’t able to control his emotions everybody ready to kill him they were controlling their self because of victor and at the same time Anna also starts to have feelings for her son while Violet and others are already ready to accept Anna as one of them I kinda feel really sad for Leon although I understand he and Anna are human nobody can tell what’s gonna happen to them in 500 or 1000 yr but I wish they could at least help him to go through with this as a family not outright already killing or thing that he goes break Anna heart after all Anna already showing signs that she is started to develop feelings for victor what happen is Leon sees this and because of the vampire High emotional issue might happen would it all start because of victors power and Anna getting attracted I just hope they won’t separate or did Anna goes deeper into her feelings for her son Anna and Leon already love this much and Anna also have victors possessiveness hope she helps in his different state and overcome it I don’t wish Anna also added to victors wives there is already a lot in future his daughter too right lol well poor Leon guy all I wish he deserves better he is a good dad in the end and a family man 😮