Victor_Weismann
A big chapter today, and I'm sorry for the quick changes from one scene to another. I will do more scenes focused on the wives and the situation in general. I feel like I need to do more slice of life. And let characters show their 'personalities'. I feel like I'm focusing too much on the action. Now it's Victor's trip to Eleanor's territory, and I plan to do some chapters focused on Victor's interaction with his wives. Making Ecchhhi scenes, making him reflect, etc. I'm sorry if some of you don't like this.