Ultimate Guaiguaipi
Author can I ask how many chapters I have to skip in this narrative arc to be able to return to the present where he resumed law because otherwise I will drop it I'm sorry I really liked I read 188 chapters in 2 days but I can't bear to read all these chapters of nerf, in a book for me the protagonist must always improve he can lose but losing his powers makes no sense I am 99% on the verge of dropping it I swear I feel really angry and frustrated I liked this Novel a bang.
yes author... why not ruin your entire novel with this stupid move... nerf the character, make them a coward, have them do something stupid such as show off a treasure that surpasses everything else the mc owns knowing DA*N WELL that he god would do something, especially after seeing how pathetic the character is acting... I'm not saying it's bad writing but the plot here is stupid... mainly for the fact of there is now a time loop(cause it's obviously time travel unlike what the character believes) that is fixated around the book which not only destroys both the book but also the entire loop itself. cause something can't be obtained from nothing. The book simply won't exist if it's a time distortion such as this. (for example - I give a god a sword, the god bestows the sword upon another entity... the entity time travels and I steal the sword... where did I originally get the sword? how did it come to exist? physics and space time won't allow his mistake... it'll be wiped, never existed. Why do you think people don't just bring a time machine to the past for us to learn and improve from... it WON'T WORK. (sorry if timelines make no sense I get extremely agitated, if characters make incredibly obviously stupid decisions I also get agitated, if author's nerf a character for no real reason, you get the idea.)
…what the heck is this chapter? Did you suddenly decide that you wanted to write a completely different story 180+ chapters in? Where did the confident, OP MC go, and why are we in the past, instead of focusing on the present story? This whole development came out of left field and is really jarring.