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Comments of chapter undefined of Loki’s Successor System

HaracasAye
HaracasAyeLv4HaracasAye

Cause he would definitely just give out the location of his house to a random stranger on the street, even if that guy saved him this doesnt make sense considering the world setting, many convos in this novel just seem off to me.

Komrade
KomradeLv1Komrade

Dont Blame it on the characters personality. it was obviously you. even a retard wouldn’t give a stranger his house location. also shouldnt he be in a hurry. he grandma is sick and could die. You could have chosen a better time to introduce flint

SkyStrider:I do admit that Jin should’ve been more skeptical but Flint just forced himself onto him. Jin’s made a few mistakes as a character but nothing incredibly stupid. These are just minor. Can’t have perfect robot characters, right? 😄

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The_Old_One
The_Old_OneLv5The_Old_One

did you just tell where your house was to a stranger?

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InHisName
InHisNameLv6InHisName

You would think someone who has been repeatedly slapped in the face, and kicked in the groin by the world for nearly every day for years on end... would learn to be cynical. Alas, Loki why have you chosen such an abysmal successor?

tomas_1277
tomas_1277Lv13tomas_1277

what a terrible interaction and conversation, her grandma is dying and you talk about how cool the guy is while revealing your information to a stranger? So far the story is really good and very interesting but if this becomes common, the quality will drop significantly

tomas_1277
tomas_1277Lv13tomas_1277

It was an extremely forced situation, I thought the character was smart from the prologue, but he just had a 12 years old mentality and intelligence. The intelligence from having straights a isn't portrayed in any way and this character doesn't spell 17-18 years old, from the world building I was expecting a more sagacious personality from the mc

Nymos_lvl9000
Nymos_lvl9000Lv3Nymos_lvl9000

disappoints in