Comments of chapter undefined of Loki’s Successor System
Loki’s Successor System
SkyStrider
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I feel like this is the wrong way to approach a story like this. The author has been mentioning racism the entire story and yet the main character judges everyone based on race. I'm not just talking about the female lizard-girl, the MC has been mentioning on multiple occasions how much he hates specific races like hobgoblins, orcs, goblins, etc. If you are trying to create a novel where you tackle the idea of racism and its negative impact on society, even as a background plot, this is for sure not the way to go about it. Especially with the way the MC is experiencing racism and then proceeding to racially discriminate afterward, it just seems disingenuous. But I love the story idea and will continue following it through, just some thoughts on the story so far.
ahh well I would be dropping now you said to stay till 6 chapters and Tbh I find it barely readable mostly in system novels I like it only if mc got some kinda edge over everyone else but there are literally hundreds of others with system too so.... it doesn't rub that part of my taste buds well maybe I will read 4 more chapters more like skim over them I don't even like the mc that much I know you made him Linda stupid and naive so your can give him character development but..... it gets on my nerves just personal opinion
