Entrail_JI
Isn't the red book only supposed to be viewable to the MC? I can go along with Kevin being able to see it as he has the advanced System and is the supposed protagonist of the story world. But now the demon Everglow, or whatever his name is, can see it? Is it just viewable for everyone at this point?
i don't like the things regarding red book and everblood since starting chapters i already commented and author replied that he will make it right but Kevin reading red book and now everblood doing same make things worse for me it just ruins the flow of the story and not make it mysterious but make it obvious plot though i don't use the word 'plot' much i feel like it really is necessary here. i think red book should be only visible to MC and not even Kevin cause he is the sole author of the book it just doesn't make any sense regarding red book visible for anyone else and regarding everblood, author told me in the past that he will make him long run villain but i told that it's not going to fit right in the story and i am still saying it just doesn't fit in the natural flow of the story. Still it's your book so you can do whatever you want and we as a reader can just point our opinions. looking forward to read more chapters. best of luckđ