Comments of chapter undefined of The Author's POV

I wonder how's Amanda's father doing rn...

Isn't the red book only supposed to be viewable to the MC? I can go along with Kevin being able to see it as he has the advanced System and is the supposed protagonist of the story world. But now the demon Everglow, or whatever his name is, can see it? Is it just viewable for everyone at this point?

Author-san just wanted to know why did kevin leave such an important item ( the red book) out in the book shelf??? Doesn't his system have an inventory??? Or inside a dimensional ring at least ? Anyways thanks for the chapter!!!

i don't like the things regarding red book and everblood since starting chapters i already commented and author replied that he will make it right but Kevin reading red book and now everblood doing same make things worse for me it just ruins the flow of the story and not make it mysterious but make it obvious plot though i don't use the word 'plot' much i feel like it really is necessary here. i think red book should be only visible to MC and not even Kevin cause he is the sole author of the book it just doesn't make any sense regarding red book visible for anyone else and regarding everblood, author told me in the past that he will make him long run villain but i told that it's not going to fit right in the story and i am still saying it just doesn't fit in the natural flow of the story. Still it's your book so you can do whatever you want and we as a reader can just point our opinions. looking forward to read more chapters. best of luck👍

tks for chap, author-sama!

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Here it is!!!!

thanks for the chapter

Thank.you

The last chapter ruined it for me. Now I cant read and imma just glance over everything till we see the cliff from the last chapter. It's so dumb to just add that in like literally could've just said that the book is gone. Venting cause I'm not going to enjoy reading this anymore

More other pov pleaseeeee! I love it :D

i've got bad feeling about this

Thanks for the chapter

i need more

I author gifted a novel called cultivation of alcamy or something. Why do I feel like Paparazzi

For a moment I thought Everblood stole that book,it would be disastrous for Ren

why do i feel something will go wrong.

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I need more. Plese