Comments of chapter undefined of The Author's POV

This chapter has been edited by an editor I recently got, feel free to tell me your thoughts.

We were all worried that Ren might become a stalker, but we never considered that Kevin would become one.

Thank the lord its not a cliffhanger. On another note I love that Kevin finally knows the truth!

this novel never let me down when i read it. never.

WAIT THE SYSTEM PART

WHAT A PHENOMENAL CHAPTER!!!!!

Another one, I need another one, I won't forgive you if I don't have another Kevin chapter

fek he's going to find out about Angelica

What would you call this? Is Kevin starting to breach the forth wall since he is reading portions of what we read?

Thanks for the chap

to be frank I am not in the favour of ren's red book with Kevin, well actually it's already happening so my thoughts doesn't really matter now but still would like to say. 1. It's showing ren' inner thought which is not good as his whole mystery character is out of the question now. 2. Kevin finding out about ren being alive like that is just....hmmm... 3. I don't know where you are going with this lets just hope it turns out good

See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

i need the next chapter asap!!!!!

Satisfying oh kevinn

thanks for the chapter

The relief you would feel the time that you found out that your Bestfriend is alive😭 I love their friendship😭❤

So, like, is the book narrating Ren’s thoughts? Because Ren has thought multiple times about being the creator of this world. Also loved this chapter but the grammar mistakes never bothered me and I’m a native born English speaker. I get that it can be confusing for someone reading this in English who English their first language but I think anyone who grew up reading English as their mother tongue who gripes is just being grouchy.

AHHH THANKS FOR THE CHAPTER IT WAS AWESOME JSKSKSKSK

Now, will Kenev know that Ren knows about his system, cause I remember Ren actually thought that Keven deserved a beating cause he had a system nd was still not able to do what Monica used to tell them. And so far the book actually tells what Ren is thinking. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Outstanding work ✨