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Comments of chapter undefined of The Author's POV

TheBustos05
TheBustos05Lv2TheBustos05

one more, one more cap pls

BigDilfCrusader
BigDilfCrusaderLv2BigDilfCrusader

When you have a feeling the author cliff hanger-ed you before even reading the chap:

TeDureShit1_2
TeDureShit1_2Lv14TeDureShit1_2

Was the deduction truly brilliant? Bit of an overhype regarding simple thought processes in my opinion. Might wanna ease up author, kinda meh if "everything" is deemed smart. Truly smart moments will hit less otherwise

WhySoSerious7
WhySoSerious7Lv15WhySoSerious7

I'm guessing ren will be cornered but at the right time union spies will barge in. ren escapes amidst the carnage.

onsguren
onsgurenLv11onsguren

im betting my life that the chip will be removed (the tracker) with the help of that rian kid that ren recruited

KoRo
KoRoLv5KoRo

how will he remove the chip?

Dewi_1412
Dewi_1412Lv13Dewi_1412

Oh, Ren is in trouble now.

Freteiro
FreteiroLv14Freteiro

so he spend days in the infirmary, and they know he can change indentes. and nobody in the monolith though about restraining and interviewing all the soldiers in the entrance explosion scene? he used this trick like three times now and it keeps working, it's almost not working now, but still works.

Bluthwann
BluthwannLv2Bluthwann

Author, When will Ren leave Monolith?

Welldressedspy
WelldressedspyLv10Welldressedspy

The union about to bust in like:

Hexagon_1234
Hexagon_1234Lv14Hexagon_1234

Author-san used cliffhanger it is super effective my anxiousness is now on about the same level as ren's burns the 2nd time around

Acexlot
AcexlotLv3Acexlot

Thanks for the chapter

Ashreborn
AshrebornLv15Ashreborn

why does he not know were monilth was located ?

Commusyou
CommusyouLv12Commusyou

Something big about to happen, huh?

Bluthwann
BluthwannLv2Bluthwann

I started wondering Will Ren escape successfully?

Arrow_569
Arrow_569Lv4Arrow_569

well they idea of burning is repeated but u saved the show by introducing they know angle . if u think i will catch the culprit at the right time nd by knowing his full capabilities it's way more interesting then with the torture . nd monolith is there home turf. good work author .

Kier_Black
Kier_BlackLv13Kier_Black

oh no! oh no! oh no no no no no !

CowboyRat
CowboyRatLv2CowboyRat

ty for the chapter! looking forward to the next one!

Arid_Landscape
Arid_LandscapeLv3Arid_Landscape

Thanks for the Chapter!

System_Creator
System_CreatorLv13System_Creator

Thanks for the chapter! Another challenge coming Ren's way huh? Entrail you never do make it easy for him