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VoiD_dEmOn
VoiD_dEmOnLv11VoiD_dEmOn

if before I don't care with whom he gonna be in future but now i do. Although I don't particularly like harem but author you have done such a great character development that i can only clap. i hope he can with Amanda and Melissa both. I like then both(may Melissa more?) and honestly if he only choose one 1 it will be very sad. Please them both or remove the romance altogether so he gets no one. I know to some it will feel disgusting and repulsive but think about for a second why only 1 of them gets to ve happy and other don't . Afterall half of people don't like harem just because there are not character development on female leads. And i believe with author skill can make a fabulous ending. Though in the end its just my opinion Author is free to do what he want. But Author if you decided it will only Amanda please do tell because i like Melissa more and i don't wanna read anymore if mc will not gonna with her😟😟. And again thank you for the chapter. Great story.

Commusyou
CommusyouLv12Commusyou

The Author's POV: Next Generation Nola the Avenger(16 years old) "My brother's still alive, and I'm the inheritor of Keiki sword style!"

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Dav0_2138
Dav0_2138Lv15Dav0_2138

Congratulations Author. You successfully made a 21 year old man cry. The moment the words “Bwuddar” were read, tears streamed down my face. I don’t think I‘ve ever had an author make me so attached to a side-character as much as you’ve made me attached to Nola. Maybe I’m just overlapping her with my adopted baby sister but seeing Nola cry like that honest to god broke my heart more than im willing to admit and made me shed a tear for the first time in years. Great writing.

Roberto_DiDonna
Roberto_DiDonnaLv15Roberto_DiDonna

Now you have to make ren’s reveal that he’s alive mad epic cause of everything that is happening with kevin, Melissa, Amanda and his family

teie
teieLv14teie

Man felt like i waited a year for this chapt

Eternal_Reader56
Eternal_Reader56Lv15Eternal_Reader56

Love where this is going, can't wait to see how Ren got out of that. I just find it hard to believe Amanda is in love. I mean they barely interacted from what I can remember. Seems more like a crush, especially at her age

juamponcenrile
juamponcenrileLv11juamponcenrile

ren when he returns

System_Creator
System_CreatorLv13System_Creator

Thanks for the chapter! Right now I'm imagining a scenario where Kevin and the the others find out that Aaron died without them doing anything, with no trace of the culprit. Then they all start to investigate as more of the same cases appear, their enemies mysteriously dying. Then they finally start to suspect that Ren is still alive, until eventually they find out about his mercenary group and find him there. Oh my god, I just made up a whole major arc off the top of my head.

CplProtoss
CplProtossLv15CplProtoss

Bruh ya got to at least let ren come back to amanda somehow

Dewi_1412
Dewi_1412Lv13Dewi_1412

Good luck with your exams and thank you for the chapter!

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Secretive_plotter
Secretive_plotterLv14Secretive_plotter

Author great chapter and best of luck with your exams

JExtra
JExtraLv11JExtra

TNE style time skip? It really feels like we're getting one but I could be wrong.

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Tenzyr
TenzyrLv14Tenzyr

See this! I just gifted the story: Luxury car

BigBroCa
BigBroCaLv14BigBroCa

novel is over then, yes?

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Ein_Mezus
Ein_MezusLv11Ein_Mezus

great chapter to ending this year

Quang_Ga
Quang_GaLv13Quang_Ga

now i hope ren will have a splendid comeback for his precious ones

Arkard
ArkardLv15Arkard

Kevin, your friends aren't exactly normal people with no influence either. Hopefully he shares the info about Aaron.

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Secretive_plotter
Secretive_plotterLv14Secretive_plotter

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

danoof
danoofLv3danoof

Ren still has his book. He used the Monolith bracelet to teleport. He uses the book to make Kevin accidentally spill a glass of water or milk. Miraculously the spill forms letters on the ground. "I AM ALIVE -Ren". Kevin is immensely confused but then realizes it's probably a skill. Unsure and with no way to prove it really was Ren he waits for a sign.

Crowno
CrownoLv4Crowno

I've noticed this for a while now, but shouldn't non fastpass users also be getting two chapters a day?