Comments of chapter undefined of The Author's POV

He needs to get stronger lol....all he knows is a single sword style and none hand to hand combat, if he loses his sword then isn't he f*cked? i also remember MC saying he needs to be poker faced more which i agree on. Maybe im just comparing him to the main characters so thats why i think he's kinda weak.

This chapter may be a bit weird as I was trying a new technique. If you find it too annoying do tell me (Well..not that I was planning on using this often)

He needs to build his own sphere of influence, all his plans are either for the end game when the demon king descends or to help him train but neither of those things will protect him or give him any form of control in the short term. He needs to stop worrying so much about stepping on people's toes or the plot and actively use his knowledge to orchestrate things to his favor, use the things he knows about certain characters be they heros or villains doesn't matter. As long as he knows what their goals are, what their personality is like and what their strengths and weaknesses are he can bring them under his command or just manipulate them to do as he wishes without them being any the wiser. I'm not saying completely throw away the plot or underestimate the other characters intelligence as to be as powerful and influential as some of them are they can definitely outsmart him in the right circumstances... he just needs to control those circumstances with his knowledge with a hefty dose of paranoia and he will be in control without a doubt!

Make him to adapt to the killing intent that he wiill never be in the same situation

dear author, now matter what the others say, I actually love how detailed this novel is. It actually gives a fresh experience when you see all the action going on step by step instead of skimming through it. Keep up the hard work, loving the novel so far.

As someone who once had his arm bend in a wierd angle once, I will say this. You won't actually feel any pain for sometime after the break. Actually you won't even feel your hand anyone. I tried to get up with my broken hand, but my hand wouldn't move, only then did I realise that my hand was broken.

u know what this was the best ever chapter i have read in all my web novels reading time best i really liked it no bs no overpowered thing . all the seen more exhilarating and to the point limited to the mc current strength and logic applied . i really loved it along with emotions shown in the chapter . really loved it good job author

where did the sword came from !!!!!! nice chapter

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You're dying not because of your luck, it's because you're dumb.

Keep up the good work

Is it because the demons are ancient and more experienced that they can find loopholes in dungeons but humans cant? Seems pretty unfair any high rank demon can just completely bully any lower dungeon with no hope of any help from stronger people

that was a beautiful chapter

info dump bores me

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Was about to drop this. But it started getting good with the tone of the book. The whole monologue style is a bit annoying. Hope the Mob MC gets a bit better and the writing polishes up a bit to help increase the tone of the story.

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the last few chapters including this were pretty cliche so, hope to see more fresh ideas

This is my queue to leave, no more comments. When I want the "mc" to die I know its to late, there is no "wait a bit, it will get better". Giving excuses and such, he should have quit school and gone to be a day worker. Giving the excuses and such basically means this is entire world is fake since the original MC is so much better, mentally and will power I mean, he must be fake because that is not how people are, how this new "mc" is how people are so its fine.