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BigiNove
BigiNoveLv5BigiNove

except the few paragraph where we learn about his family and union the other thing in this chapter are just useless info dump..... I try to be fair but that's how I feel

The_Old_One
The_Old_OneLv5The_Old_One

Good chapter!

HeikyZX
HeikyZXLv3HeikyZX

Still at loss about this Status and now Appraisal... doesn't seem to be a system and with the author citing [The Novel's Extra], I thought that he would insert a similar setting to make it work but... nothing lol

He11Watcher
He11WatcherLv15He11Watcher

If no one ever came to get this sword style, why did he write so much about it in his novel. Seems like his novel went all over the place. Too much detail in some areas and completely void in others.

la_belle_vie
la_belle_vieLv2la_belle_vie

Nice chapter

BuzzGrave
BuzzGraveLv15BuzzGrave

Thanks for the chapter ~

taeka_santiago
taeka_santiagoLv1taeka_santiago

death flags? huh? him using that term, is making it seem like that he's part of the plot even though he's just a mob also, him hurrying to be strong just to survive is an entirely different goal to him hurrying to be as strong as the protag it's different, sigh some iffy parts, don't know if it's due to the author making things similar to TNE, that some small parts doesn't just add up

Invisiblevoice
InvisiblevoiceLv6Invisiblevoice

So, how many years has that swordmaster been dead? Because i wouldn't trust that rope if i were him.

DiamondQueen1011
DiamondQueen1011Lv2DiamondQueen1011

I feel like this is a warning to authors to not omit important details lol

Sipster
SipsterLv1Sipster

Amazing chapter!

Catalina_Ramos
Catalina_RamosLv1Catalina_Ramos

bajar 5 horas una cuerda?, es cierto que es fantasía pero suponiendo que es humanamente posible bajar. ¿que tan profundo está la tumba o lo que sea?, es mucho, es exagerado, es ridículo, ¿van al centro de la tierra o algo?

ImNamedSoul
ImNamedSoulLv1ImNamedSoul

[Constellation green haired swordsman appears to be lost]

Sleeve_114
Sleeve_114Lv2Sleeve_114

According to tje author the first 40 chapters are choppy so it's gonna get even better

ResidentialPsycho
ResidentialPsychoLv15ResidentialPsycho

Too much tell, not enough show.

mochim00n
mochim00nLv10mochim00n

thank you author

MiguelLezodyDiaz
MiguelLezodyDiazLv3MiguelLezodyDiaz

can't wait for the main plot

kjxudvc
kjxudvcLv13kjxudvc

❤❤

Amera_Mee
Amera_MeeLv4Amera_Mee

thanks for the chapter

Wendell_Woodward
Wendell_WoodwardLv15Wendell_Woodward

Im out, story is well written but lacks to much logic

No_Reading_No_Life
No_Reading_No_LifeLv15No_Reading_No_Life

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