Comments of chapter undefined of Magical Marvel (HP X MCU)

not a very good pov chapter to be honest, if we really cared that much about mystiques thoughts we'd and asked for it, we wanted a pov of the fight and reaction to the mc not just some thoughts from mystique about charles and eric and minorly about the fight

its nice that someone knew it was jasmine. atleast it can be the start of jasmine being in power on the open and not always in the shadows..

Hmm, the chapter was okay but it felt like it was 90% saying what already happened rather than any new information. As readers, we don't need a play-by-play of the previous chapter. Alternatively, if this chapter was Mystique desperately trying to help move people out of the way of the large-scale fight as the two super-beings duked it out and they were but ants stuck between them would have made it a bit more impactful and given meaning for the retelling instead of just 'this happened then this happened then this happened and wow!'.

I think author don't know how to write MC. Or he can make MC look misterious only this way. In short though story is nice, he needs to level up MC characteristic.

Thanks for the chapter

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hoped that mc brought jean with her...

ah this chapter went over my head.

Thank you for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter

i want jasmine to crush xavier too like dumbles HAHAHAHAHAH what happened to jasmine's sister though i kinda missed her HAHAHAHAH

Thanks for the chapter!

Thanks for the chapter.