Comments of chapter undefined of Just Saiyan (DBZ/DC)

This fight with the furies was really well done, you could feel Shallot slowly being hounded by a group with extreme coordination and then it was revealed to be a clone which was icing on the cake. Good job author

I was super annoyed at first seeing mc getting beaten and thought he got nerfed but that twist if him being a clone was cool af good job author san

I’m so hyped man I was wondering why he was starting to get worn down didn’t realize he was a clone they weren’t ready for the real one please hurry with the next chapter post haste

Great Chapter, had me on the edge of my seat for a while there when I thought he lost and was getting captured, I'm glad I was wrong but, Will he still get a Zenkai from his clone dying even if it wasn't all him?

Really good and enjoyable chapter. To the point I am annoyed with myself for having one potential flaw glaring so hard that I couldnt ignore it. I could very much be wrong but in my head because of it being a whip user it just stood out so glaringly. It has him facing her and while she may not be up under him shes definitely fairly close with her whip dart. He had the energy attack ready and fired it. Its traveling towards her and too fast for her nimble butt to dodge. No one was near which he was taking advantage of and Steppen wasnt there either initially. Yet Steppen on his obviously quick vehicle arrives. Sees the situation. Comes up with the solution. Fires off the attack at a fairly safe distance himself. The attack reaches her. Hits her and knocks her away from the attack. All before his attack can reach her. Everything was perfectly done but that with the whip user. I couldnt NOT see it being wrong because I automatically picture it while reading it. Basically automatically with all the reading I do I do it unconsciously at times. Idk maybe Wolfs energy attacks are just really really fast. That's an answer I suppose. Wonder what will happen with the Furies. I vaguely recall women fanfics with Barda changing sides. Getting married, even with Superman alongside Lois and the Queen. All of them were raised to be twisted killers though. So maybe something will happen with Barda being spared but I doubt any others will be. Every story I've seen that has them has them offed. Harley Quinn is a must have waifu by so many but none of these girls are by anyone I've come across that I can recall. Nor someone worth converting into a good guy.

Nice chapter... i found it odd that kara nor raven came to his aid lol. He had the whole thing under control.

My dude literally said this is only a fraction of my power 😆

Ok the clone thing got me by surprise, I was actually getting angry lol

Well played, author. Well played indeed.

Je ne comprend pas pourquoi Darksaid à fait tout cela dans le seul but de le viser directement ? Je veux dire, le mec mais à peine Superman dans ses yeux et le MC est genre 100 fois moins connu que Superman, alors pourquoi il est visé ?

Thanks for the chapter

This chapter was crazy loved it

i just realized the the title of this chapter "being overwhelmed" wasnt about him gettin overwhelmed but darksaid forces being the ones that are getting overwhelmed (yes, i know i said to many times overwhelmed but it was to get the point cross)

That would have been a great opportunity for growth… but would it still be effective if he isn’t actually beaten?

I thought that he will be saved by plot Armor. But you're a one wonderful Mf...

Honestly I didn't expect this author, you got me there . Thanks for the charpter

Darkseid nice.

Thanks for chaps dude