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Comments of chapter undefined of Just Saiyan (DBZ/DC)

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Denzel_theking
Denzel_thekingLv6Denzel_theking

thanks for the chapter, I dont think I should read gone native as it will most likely be horrible and make everything before meaning less

tsuki_liet
tsuki_lietLv3tsuki_liet

but it's seems like there's no new chapter for going native

Draugzel:I could see from where you are coming from, but for me, it felt more like everything was built up for the moment he goes to earth. It also seems like the empire he built up to that point will remain a story point in the sequel, which underlines the fact that what he has done wasn't for nothing. ^^
BOZALTO
BOZALTOLv2BOZALTO

Mc's emotions chance more than the of ten women together.

12344321Sda
12344321SdaLv312344321Sda

Well i just wanted to point out something The SS transformation is a multiplier So it doesn't mean that a ss2 or ss1 have a fixed power For example a saiyan with a base power of 500,000,000 without transforming can beat a saiyan who transformed to ss2 because if we say ss2 multiplies by 200 and the base power is 2,000,000 the power with transformation would be 400,000,000 wich is less than the saiyan not transforming so a ss1/2/3 can be anything from a planet buster to a solar system to a galaxy........ And this gives a bigger problem The DB universe is way to OP Master roshi destroyed the moon with a power level of 100 So saiyans being beings that can multiplie there power by 10 at least are way to op

Brokedepressed
BrokedepressedLv14Brokedepressed

Will he ever get back to DBZ? Maybe Whis could grab him when he looks for a 6th saiyan to make a super saiyan god for Beerus

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joaos
joaosLv5joaos

Great chapter, I have some doubts you will include beings like Trigon, Paralax, Anti-monitor, Mr. Mxyzptlk. Because if so, it's okay to add the most powerful forms of dc heroes and villains comics

AjiTae
AjiTaeLv13AjiTae

So. The MC had found a random sapient. Then he killed him for no reason. Then he ate him. I don't know what to say...

Chaddts
ChaddtsLv1Chaddts

this is one if not the most obviously contrived examples of writing i have ever had the misfortune of reading. How anyone can read this without cringing at it or mocking the author i have no idea. 1 inert dragon ball for trying.

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Shadoin_13
Shadoin_13Lv14Shadoin_13

you can write good chapters

DragonkingKyo
DragonkingKyoLv6DragonkingKyo

thanks for the chapter

SCP_UnKnown
SCP_UnKnownLv13SCP_UnKnown

👌

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Shameless_Buddha
Shameless_BuddhaLv6Shameless_Buddha

Thanks for the chapter 🙂

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Ichigo18
Ichigo18Lv5Ichigo18

Thx for the chapter

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Maxinonor
MaxinonorLv6Maxinonor

thanks for the chapter

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Lucifer_Dragneel
Lucifer_DragneelLv4Lucifer_Dragneel

Thanks for the chapter

Alexandre_Cardoso
Alexandre_CardosoLv1Alexandre_Cardoso

Essa história tá um lixo!! Ninguém quer saber o que o protagonista tá comendo ou os detalhes do que ele tá sentindo... Só falta vc querer falar sobre o cheiro da merda dele, essa bosta deveria ter sido praticamente resumindo tudo no primeiro capítulo no máximo no segundo... Isso tá um lixo!!🖕🏻 Translator: Brazilian PT

Aye_itz_cloudz
Aye_itz_cloudzLv14Aye_itz_cloudz

Thxs for the chap

VainKiru
VainKiruLv4VainKiru

Seeing that you got inspired by IdeasGuy does your Saiyan race also have longer lifespan the powerful they are?

Goldenswiftreader
GoldenswiftreaderLv5Goldenswiftreader

A little dark, but very well written.

kiddeath1998
kiddeath1998Lv15kiddeath1998

I'm glad this is getting better I knew it was going to, just the first two chapters almost killed me

WolfLord
WolfLordLv14WolfLord

Thanks for the chapter on a good story