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Ah yes, of course. Author her character feels forced. They just interacted one time and the second time they meet they’re eating together and now they’re friends?? You said she’ll be important later on but that’s exacty why you have to handle her first apparitions, look i’m not a pro author or even a startinf author but i know that a forced character being important isn’t enjoyable to read. No offence these are just my thoughts.
Man I don’t think I’ve ever been more disappointed, like my dude spent so much effort trying to get those eyes just for them to go to aisa. I can’t speaking this being forced or no but I can say that this is a giant waste of time, the “reward” wasn’t equal to the effort Orion put into getting those ingredients And another thing y was she in the room couldn’t she have waited outside or something?