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Comments of chapter undefined of Warlock of War: My Ares System

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Omniscient_Asura
Omniscient_AsuraLv11Omniscient_Asura

That’s some god damn BS I don’t care what anyone says that’s a nerd for the mc and buff for this girl wtf

equuip
equuipAuthorequuip

He'll be getting something much better later on so don't worry

Charlzie
CharlzieLv4Charlzie

Ah yes, of course. Author her character feels forced. They just interacted one time and the second time they meet they’re eating together and now they’re friends?? You said she’ll be important later on but that’s exacty why you have to handle her first apparitions, look i’m not a pro author or even a startinf author but i know that a forced character being important isn’t enjoyable to read. No offence these are just my thoughts.

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Ttrion
TtrionLv4Ttrion

so all his hard work just went to that girl? just like that? is this a Nerf or something else author?

Virgin_Loli
Virgin_LoliLv3Virgin_Loli

I haven't felt such disappointment for a long time

KingOfSin1453
KingOfSin1453Lv4KingOfSin1453

This is probably the chaoters that im most disappointed on

MBPono_Mor
MBPono_MorLv13MBPono_Mor

Wow just wow what a waste of time and resources the MC almost died getting all that even the penalty for failing was death nd this is what we end up with...what waste

Tad_LaRue
Tad_LaRueLv15Tad_LaRue

thank you for the chapter, but what a waste of a lot of time.

Stay_Motivated
Stay_MotivatedLv3Stay_Motivated

Ecnival
EcnivalLv13Ecnival

I will drop this novel if he doesn't get even better eyes within the next 1-3 chapters.

Dragon912
Dragon912Lv2Dragon912

Man I don’t think I’ve ever been more disappointed, like my dude spent so much effort trying to get those eyes just for them to go to aisa. I can’t speaking this being forced or no but I can say that this is a giant waste of time, the “reward” wasn’t equal to the effort Orion put into getting those ingredients And another thing y was she in the room couldn’t she have waited outside or something?

Lucifer_The_Fallen
Lucifer_The_FallenLv15Lucifer_The_Fallen

Thx!

Rooky_AL
Rooky_ALLv3Rooky_AL

Thanks for the chapter.