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Comments of chapter undefined of Reincarnated as an Energy with a System

Blubby
BlubbyLv13Blubby

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RecordKeeper
RecordKeeperLv15RecordKeeper

no complaint on the subject, and it already seems to be moving at a good speed.

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Mello_Dragneel1412
Mello_Dragneel1412Lv4Mello_Dragneel1412

i just don't have enough power stones, sorry, i had to make sacrifices šŸ˜­

AwfulVileDinist
AwfulVileDinistLv15AwfulVileDinist

I will say that VRMMO is a lot different from where the novel started. I know I voted for this because I like "do everything" kind of novels, but if it's not getting engagement recently, I think you should go back to the type of story that made your readers unlock chapter 41 onwards. šŸ˜‰

pirate_king_5297
pirate_king_5297Lv2pirate_king_5297

I like his class and skills and the betraying the demons quest seems kinda fun so Davlopmant in that would be good

Ancientfire
AncientfireLv15Ancientfire

im liking the game part of the story at the moment, but it has definitely taken a different path than the rest of the novel. i think it would be great to add in a twist to this part, and Ning will eventually find out what it is. Such as the "game" not actually being a game, and instead being another universe or something

Mr_peppermint27
Mr_peppermint27Lv14Mr_peppermint27

Came back after catching up on the Alchemy book. itā€™s too good.

Madison_Ackowey
Madison_AckoweyLv14Madison_Ackowey

The one complaint that I have is that it just feels like Ning is at the beginning again, learning how to use another system (the game interface), but the difference this time is that everyone else has basically the same system, so it feels like Ning has lost a bit of intrigue. Some people have suggested a twist like ā€the game is actually a real place!ā€ But Iā€™ve seen that before many times, and I donā€™t think it would feel much like a twist (it could still be interesting, though). My suggestion is to give Ningā€™s energy system a bit more screen-time, or perhaps delve into how the gameā€™s technology functions, and how Ning as an energy can interact with it differently from other players (this could apply to Saphandra as well).

Amy_Yollin
Amy_YollinLv4Amy_Yollin

Make it a twist! Like the Game is a real place!

Auri_Kvothe
Auri_KvotheLv15Auri_Kvothe

mostly not enough fp to go around.