KimChangMin
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Dude try using Grammarly it'll help improve you're grammar
lol you should too
interesting beginning inspired by current situation in creative way, hope it will be good
Interesting , has potential. The gramar is some times off but it isn't that bad , so good job.
Great start!đđ yeah thats all I can sayđ
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
