Comments of chapter undefined of Mercury - Reborn as a Cat
Mercury - Reborn as a Cat
Kernoel_77
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this was all a bit much... mc really bullied these people. he just sauntered in to a city, attacked a wealthy looking man just because he was boasting about his achievments, crashed the city lords dinner party, theatened to gut the city lord, and last, goaded and assaulted the city lords son. that could have veen an important political dinner, and the words the boy first said were not entitled at all. though he acted entitled afterwards. "who are these intrufers that interrupted this feast?", that is a reasonable question. it doesnt even sound entitled.
Just got to re-read the chapter and edited some stuff, especially about the City Lord's thing. The boy is now more of a jerk, and a young adult (22 rather than 17). Didn't change the interaction with the previous noble, because that one is a reference to Nazeem in Skyrim, an Npc who is very infamous for being a jerk. He repeated that Npc's lines almost one for one, so it's kind of an inside joke; hopefully that clears it up a bit more. Thanks for the criticism, I do take it seriously ^^
