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Comments of chapter undefined of The Legacy of the cursed Family

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The Legacy of the cursed Family

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nothando_dlamini
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If anyine told me that this book was written by a thirteen year old then I would have laughed and disagreed with them. World and character building is on point and goodness I love the book already and the way you lure your readers into the book with your Blurd is amazing. Keep up the good work. [img=update]

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AreeSensei
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A great start. Chapters aren't too lengthy, and scenes are written fluidly and nicely.

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Kiyomi_Nekomi
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So far the premise is interesting. I would like to have more descriptions of the character's feelings and reactions, for now it seems to be just dialogue and place descriptions, and I can assume some things from there. Maybe it is just me but too many characters at once could be confusing. I read the prologue but I prefer to get to know the characters little by little instead.

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