Aht
Very weird choice in the direction of the story. I mean with the chapters being in the 100 now, this post is gonna be somewhat useless, but oh well. It's funny how you criticized certain things about pokémon, but go and do something even way worst. 1) You criticized in the beginning about children 10-12 leaving to go on a pokémon adventure by themselves and made the story be 15 before they could do that which was extremely reasonable... but then you do a 180 flip and he leaves home at 5 years old instead... O.o 2) You repeatedly mention him trying to act like a child so that he would fit in and enjoy his new life and family... to suddenly have a 5 year old, who is suddenly smart/dumb enough to want to leave their current family to investigate their old family. What's the point of the new family then? They barely know him since he only started talking for about 2-3 years, and now he just gonna go away for the next 10 years? Those early childhood years are crucial for most families. If I was Gary, I would probably barely remember him 1 years later.