Aht
boring , introductions do not have to be that detailed , man , especially with side characters . You dragged a lot of chapters just for that, put together a lot of Pokemon series, a lot of boring things happened. well good luck with your story this is good but not my cup of tea anymore, it's not that I don't like it or anything but from your type of writing there will be a lot of unnecessary nonsense, even with your introduction I guarantee a lot of people will forget about it. once again good luck.