Comments of chapter undefined of The Tales Of Divine Sun Dragon

Good flow in establishing the character. I like the relationships between the family members and friends. Also, ideal way to introduce MC to the other junior power players.

I really hope the girl is a good match. If she is the Phoenix to the dragon then she should also hopefully be as powerful and be able to help him out sometimes. It is rare for the love interests to be relevant so I hope this novel can do something new.

Your novel is truly perfect until now, you gave the protagonist two "cheats" that are, in my opinion, overpowered, but to become powerfull he has to practice, which is rare in novels with this tematic. Because of that Xiao Long is becoming Op, but people from major places don't think he is that much unless they arevtrue Experts (the pair of "father" and "daugther").

Nice 👍🏻