Comments of chapter undefined of The Tales Of Divine Sun Dragon

Thoughts so far on the novel is this: The author needs to work on his verbs and sentence structure so it reads nice. Correct punctuation needs a little work. Using more descriptive words would make the world and MC clearer than what it has been. MC come across as cold and emotionless. It feels like I'm reading a documentary written by a person who was just getting the main points of the person interviewing the person the book was about. I can understand the main points, but its hard to read when every other sentence has word flow issues or incorrectly structured sentences. I like the book and the idea and story it's trying to convey is entertaining. keep up the writing author and try to keep grinding until you polish out your writing style [img=recommend]