already like it. yes it's short but that's ok. this is actually only my second hp fanfic so I'm excited to see how you do it. it helps that the MC was a potterhead before death đ
Well... I feel like all confudus stuff he is doing is just WAY too advanced for his skill level, I mean he is straight up brainwashing people to do what he wants. Also it's just way too convenient he can just make Potter family elf his own. overall stuff is just too convenient.