Comments of chapter undefined of MHA: Minor Quirk System ( almost having no quirk)

it would be a better fanfic if he wasnt a grown man reincarnated in a boys body. Crying bc he wants to be a hero? Then you chalk it up to "it's because the firs Oki left his feelings." rn I could over give it a 2/5. I never got how reincarnated people try to fulfill a wish of who they reincarnated to, I mean especially ones as long and dangerous as 'to be a hero'. "yeah bro, I'll fulfill your wish even if it kills me or ruins my life, I reincarnated for nothing basically"

Why become a hero when you can be the bad guy.

I like the chapter but couldn’t you have erased some of Ex-Oki’s memories like him becoming a hero because that’s was Ex-Oki’s last wish I understand but it’s confuses me. Btw couldn’t you have given him his own body to reincarnate into instead of someone else’s.

ok, sorry have to drop the story, for one the tags say antihero which doesnt seem the case, 2 mc is an idiot, like really an idiot and 3: his calm mind doesnt even seem to work.

Author your story is good. However, there are few gramatical and sentence structuring errors that you can fix. This will make your novel easy to read and understand for the readers. Hope this helps you in Your writing.

author there many mistakes in this chapter pls check it

Author, did you already forget that MC has calm mind(Legendary) skill? why did he react like that??

Thanks for the chapter! Looking forward to the systems next appearance and what he'll get from it!

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thanks for the chapter

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Thanks for the chapter

Looking forward to the next chap👊👍

thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter ! 😁👍

Great, another guy who had a hero complex and from the few bits of interaction alone, i can already tell that he'll do something stupid soon..

Not a bad start, but the execution is a bit cringe. The concept is really interesting.