Comments of chapter undefined of Awakened: Evolving to Godhood

Calling it now! This fool Elliot’s gonna believe in the power of friendship! He believes in fairness and that people are inherently good!

I loved his comments to the bully

good that's what I like

only thing that didn't make sense was that the characters are saying long monologues while running. other than that not bad

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don't worry soon mc will be

Cliche, repetitive, cringe but still, I will continue reading this, maybe this will improve after some chapters

already down but not yet out, a never say die personality ... that makes him numero uno in sheer grit, consistency and perseverance. this is how the legendary and fabulous turtle beat the complacent hare !!! he only needs some fortuitous opportunities not just to level up, but even surpass these bullies !!! gi Elliot go !!!

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did he just run for two chapters?

physical training doesn’t exist, magic gives you stamina.

cliche but passable. i hope the mc can grow as a person.

So, if we take each lap to be 500m (or 1/4 mile), 70 laps is 35km (or around 18 miles). While 4 hours is long, it isn’t terrible.

Thanks for the chap

weakness is also strength