Comments of chapter undefined of Stop following me, Mafia king

Stop following me, Mafia king

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JinnaDennisLv1JinnaDennis

Since you have one chapter, I will hold my review. The beginning seems fairly sound. It does need some editing, such things as punctuation and sentence structure BUT that being said, i like the set up for the beginning and hope the plot takes off! Good job! :) I will add to my library to read more then review deeper in.

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Dymphina_SalumLv4Dymphina_Salum

now am interested to read more good job #innocent me

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Isaac_VaughnLv2Isaac_Vaughn

you caught my attention. story sounds good for now, but punctuation needs some work

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aria_00004Lv1aria_00004

very nice chapter ..... i am waiting for chapter 2...what will happen

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Yvette_CeliaLv10Yvette_Celia

It's a good story, I can tell that if this continue, this story will be a really great.

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MoonaisyLv3Moonaisy

Nice first chapter! Can't wait for the next one!

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Shade_ArjuunLv14Shade_Arjuun

Hmmmm let's go..... I'm intrigued...I want to learn more about this lead

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